Wednesday, October 15, 2008

webtext reflection...

i thought this project was extremely difficult. especially after receiving my grade. i thought i had done a great job. maybe not an A paper, but at the very least a low B-high C... i moved my references onto a separate page, added a few gross photos, changed my conclusion to include why tattoo safety is such an important topic, moved some sentences around to make a little more sense, and threw in a few extra sentences to make transitions less abrupt. hope that did the trick and i get a better grade....

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