overall i think my podcast went well. i had a little trouble with the program being buggy but nothing major.
i think that i want to do my multimodal webtext on tattoo removal or something similar. any comments? i wish we could have done our presentations for the class. oh well...

podcast proposal

So my podcast is going to be about body modification vs mutilation, what the difference is, and why people would argue that all modification is mutilation. I am hoping that it will work smoothly in a conversation format. let me know what you guys think.

webtext reflection...

i thought this project was extremely difficult. especially after receiving my grade. i thought i had done a great job. maybe not an A paper, but at the very least a low B-high C... i moved my references onto a separate page, added a few gross photos, changed my conclusion to include why tattoo safety is such an important topic, moved some sentences around to make a little more sense, and threw in a few extra sentences to make transitions less abrupt. hope that did the trick and i get a better grade....

hey guys, i missed class on wed and i was wondering if i could get some feed back on my proposal
Thanks!!!

my work